by BrazenHorse
6 chapters of jerking off and minor assistance? Story is slow and lame...
I am really enjoying reading this, even with the short chapters...lots of detail, in short spurts.
And, I am glad this is such fantasy...shooting him by the quarts, at such distances...such a imagination. At least Ashley has bared her boobs now!! Hopefully more will be shown off soon!!
Five**5**Stars...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💥💥💥💥💥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💫💫💫💫💫⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡
They're no reason for there to be so many chapters, especially when hardly anything is happening in each one. This is where I get off the train. The incest is gross and unwelcome, and the plot is over the top ridiculous.