All Comments on 'Summer Fling Ch. 01'

by Rose23_67

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
missrhondamissrhondaabout 2 years ago

I am looking forward to how the story develops. Excellent start, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please, please, please find an editor. The number of mistakes in spelling, punctuation, and straight up missing words makes this story very hard to enjoy.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous