All Comments on 'Summer Wine'

by AlinaX

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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 month ago

Great fantasy, @AlinaX

walt555walt555about 1 month ago

Hells yeah!! Great story. I hope you add more to it.

lexlogan8lexlogan8about 1 month ago

Hot Hot HOT! I was expecting humor, instead a wonderful blend of excited, embarrassed, twisted, tender, horny and romantic.

TheJoker33TheJoker33about 1 month ago

Great story! 5 stars! Can't wait for the next part.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 1 month agoAuthor

Thanks for all the comments, everyone. I did originally intend to follow all the way through the competition, and I think I still will, but it developed in a more interesting way and this felt like a good story in itself.

BiggaluteBiggaluteabout 1 month ago

Fabulous piece of erotic writing x

mancub555mancub555about 1 month ago

What an incredibly well written and thought out story with hot passion-filled sex! Now I want to read a lot more of your stories!

42Below42Belowabout 1 month ago

Surprising! As always your imagination is a delight! Competition?! You are without compare!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapters to see who wins the competition! But well done!

AlinaXAlinaXabout 1 month agoAuthor

I'm very busy irl, but plan to continue this story when things calm down again.

Thanks for the lovely comments. :-)

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterabout 1 month ago

Fuck yes! More please.

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 month ago

Way too fun of a started and a well developed and well played story. 5 stars on the start and rock on these fun players. Lot the sexual adventure take off. Cheers

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 1 month ago

Great storyline. I'm in. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I'm really turned on by women who choose to fuck multiple men. They're not sluts, rather they are exciting, sexy women. Notice in this story that the women seem to be more willing than the men, which is probably true in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Really well executed. Can’t wait for the sequel!!

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...