All Comments on 'Sun, Sand and Skin: Day 01'

Bingo-bango-bongo. Put these horny Skunks in costume, and get them some CosPlay Partners! So far, this has been a little vanilla and slow. But, I’m hoping things ramp up and juice up in cumming chapters. Still, you’ve laid the groundwork. These two are smoking hottt! Let’s see what kind of trouble they can get into. Let’s get these two lovebirds laid, dazed, and confused! It’s not the happy ending that sells the story. It’s the believable conflict. Then the happy ending.

What happens in day 2. Forget the condoms. Bareback is better. They should switch partners at sometime.

Things will definitely ramp up and juice up as the story progresses! I'm afraid there won't be any dressing up but there will be a lot of stripping off. Everyone will be naked in the next chapter - with humiliating results for Dan. But that is still only the beginning...

Sorry, the second comment came after I submitted my first reply. Emma is on birth control so condoms won't feature too heavily. On Day 2 Emma will further lose her inhibitions to a decidedly mixed reaction from Dan. As for switching partners, a week is a long time and you didn't think I would only tease, did you? ;)

Awesome teasing...

Cant wait when ryan mistankly sees topless emma and seduces

Please update part 2

Excellent and slow seductive narrative... Kudos!!

Eagerly waiting for next

Erotic one, waiting for the next part

Thank you so much for the comments, they are really motivating. I am a very slow writer but I did a thousand words of Day 2 yesterday and I hope I'll be able to finish it this year. It is more teasing and slow seduction but with a few surprises thrown in. Spoiler: Emma takes her top off on Day 2...

Wow, we will definitely looking forward for your erotic narration.

Wow, we will be definitely looking forward for some erotic pleasure.

Wow

Definitely Looking Forward for some erotic adventure.

Wowww... Some accidental tits show, playing n sucking.

Definitely looking forward for erotic adventure of Day 2

Woww

Definitely looking forward for accidental emma's 34Ds flash to ryan (wants to know her size) ...teasing to some more action.

Oh God!!!!!

One of the best among many hot and pleading fantastic stories i have ever read.

You did a great work focusing on the plot & character building. Feeling exotic with the pace.

How the heat is building in each one specially with spoiler alert Ryan seems to be interested in Emma's Rack, wondering about their size and a beautiful package could.

Dunno what going to be next however seems to be so much fun with slow seduction steady.

Now keeping eyes daily for day 2.

Lots of Love from India

Thanks for the continued comments. Really lovely to have! I've almost finished part 2 (maybe a fifth to go!) and hope to have it up by the end of the month. Spoiler: Emma is 32G.

Oh, Interesting!

Lots of fun onto next part, waiting for it.

Almost there! I thought the next chapter would finish at about 6,000 words but I've just hit that and need another thousand or so. In the mean time, check out this fun little story I did for the 750 word challenge: https://literotica.com/s/perfect-replica-1