All Comments on 'Sunday on My Mind'

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WhipsAndWiccaWhipsAndWiccaabout 4 years ago
Ran out of steam?

It's good, but it's like you started writing this and then just as it got to fun part, you ran out of steam. This could definitely be longer, instead of a dissatisfying and quick wrap-up.

Your writing and description before then is very good though, keep up the good work.

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