All Comments on 'Sunny Morning'

by EcnivGib

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Confusing...

I’m not really understanding. Th story isn’t clear, and it doesn’t build up enough before switching points of view. Not that good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So erotic. Would love to have this experience with my partner. Made my entire body tingle

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I have been writing stories in the past and shared them with only a few. Here is my attempt to go broad and see what a broader audience thinks. I hope you enjoy and feel free to leave me kind comments or constructive feedback.