All Comments on 'Sunshine and Darkness Ch. 02'

Better than Mills and Boon but only just.

Good description and clever switching of point of view,

Great description, I could picture is so vividly in my head, Thank you. I loved it!!

this was a very good and erotic read.

Great read...you need to post more!

This is just getting good! Do you plan to finish it? I hope so. I would love the chance to co-author the rest of the story! If you're interested,contact me at kerrynesbitt@live.com. I hope to hear from you!

i would realy hope that you plan to write more to this story. it is rather a very good tale so far...trs

You've seduced me into the story, I hope I'm not left hanging. The possibilities are endless...

Sweet story -but her panties change colour :P

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^_^=

well written, and the build up makes it sooo erotic. Well done.

Paul

Butterfly - that was incredible you took me with them on their intense erotic journey!! well done!!

Great writing, wifey.

very good wify. looks really good, your writing is really smooth

well done wifey. your writing is very smooth. enjoyed it alot

very sexy- sounds like a personal fantasy to me!