All Comments on 'Super Bowl Half Time Show'

And a fun time was had by all!

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A married couple of neighbors also staged such a show in the same room with me. Only I noticed and joined them, otherwise threatening them to completely sever our friendship and disgrace them for the whole of our city. They agreed. My little dick fit perfectly in his wife's ass. To her husband, with his huge 6" - she did not allow it. The neighbor's husband was incredibly happy to see at least my dick in his slut's ass...

It's amazing you did that in 750 words! However it's also a pity, because the story begs to be longer. A friend discovered your panties in the kitchen? Hubby's spunk dripped down your leg while you continued to serve? Friends asked if you would sit on their laps, too? Half time shows are not so fascinating to men, so one of them may have continued to check you out , while you were fucking, and discovered your indiscretion. Not to mention the smell of sex blending with the smell of pizza.... 5*~~ JB

Silly. But at least it wasn’t more from the avalanche of cuck crap we seem to be getting lately.

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That was absolutely erotic.

I think some friends notice but were to polite to say anything hahaha.

I love it when loving couples have fun and adventure -- minus anyone else.

Nice work SimonDoom.

Glad this isn't one of those trash cuck stories.

I hate cuck stories.

Cute story but unless these two were behind all of the others there was no way they would not notice a wife going up and down on her husband.

This is exactly how sex should be between loving partners. A bit cheeky and risky, but without others! Good work. I really liked the story!

Nothing beats showing off your sexy wife in a room full of men. Well, except fucking her.

She left her dirty underwear on the kitchen floor? Thats sexy?

Real people do not fuck to "rap", house, or hippityhoppity rabbit muzak.

Just more reminiscence of Californisocialistica activity.

Wait! What? You mean she tied him to the chair while she fucked all his friends, right? I mean you can’t possibly have posted a NON-CUCK story in LW! Hell, I was almost certain that was now completely forbidden, except for SaddleTramp, who must have been grandfathered in. Well, thanks SD! Maybe there’s still a few postings worth reading.

Huh? They watched the halftime show? I call bs.

It’s an okay little story but would have been better, and been received better, if you’d spent another couple of hours on it and produced 7k words.

Another very rare actual loving wife in the in sewer filled L.W section of Lit.

Nice to see, and read.

@mattenw I’m glad you are the foremost authority on how others should act with their own sex lives. Stating a ridiculous comment about not including others in a group solely dedicated to including others is , well, dumb as fuck. If you don’t like what others do in their private lives or what authors write about, simply move on and shut the hell up. Go find another category to hang out in as clearly you’re only here to cause trouble.

Now that was a loving wife.

I hope they gang-bang her next year as they watch the Eagles win!!!

One word: TOUCHDOWN!

What!? The HUBBY had the big cock!? No hubby humiliation, or over reacting and getting an instant divorce because she CONSIDERED dancing with someone!?

Are you sure you posted in the right category?

(Nice work, btw. I enjoyed it)

I love a good football story!

Excruciatingly clever

The first sentence is perfect, and then it gets better.

Cheesy indeed, I almost downgraded you from five to four stars since you didn't mention guacamole.

He shoots, he scores! No wait, that's hockey. But it sure sounds like they sure knew how to enjoy the halftime show. And you did mention that hubby's favorite chair was positioned at the back of the room, out of eyeshot of his buddies. Though it might have been kind of fun if they'd been caught. 'Cause who knows what would have happened then. Maybe a kinky manage a huit, that his sexy wife would have surely enjoyed? Well done! 5 stars.

A perfect little gem! 5*

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Halftime whore.

Good story.

Cute story. Thanks for your writing.

Wow an actual loving wife in LW story. What a quaint idea :P 5 stars!

@inka2222 I have to agree I'm actually a little surprised to be honest cause every other story in this category is definitely not about a loving wife as there about the wife cheating and everything else and if that is what people think a loving wife is they really need to learn what a loving wife actually is in hurry so they can stop posting in the wrong catagory

For a 750 it wasn’t bad, it has to be short nd to the point.

A guy willing to risk his wife being outed as a total slut, in front of a bunch of friends? Nah, nothing loving about that. Just an idiot. what if things got out of hand and he couldn't control the other men? No love there.

@anon - before posting garbage nonsense, first go buy a dictionary to find out what "slut" means (hint: having sex with your own husband don't qualify), and second read some books on male psychology. "I got me a wife who loves me and give me sex" is a thing to raise his social status among his friends, not lower. Well, unless his friends are all idiots like you who were born and raised in Victorian England, or in a monastery.