All Comments on 'Super-Ex Tease and Denial'

by Salamando_Flames

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estragonestragonalmost 13 years ago
Good Concept

but if she is a superhero, why is she hanging around with a loser like him? Why can't she find a superhero with an eleven-inch railgun who can squirt a gallon? I can't really suspend disbelief as well as I (and you, as author) might wish.

Salamando_FlamesSalamando_Flamesalmost 13 years agoAuthor

Estragon - Who says she doesn't have a super-lover on the side? ;-)

She's teasing him out of revenge, not because she actually wants him as a lover anymore.

SeedeeBeetooSeedeeBeetooalmost 13 years ago

Nicely done! Kate is an extremely powerful super -- so many abilities! I do hope that she doesn't have to give Don the golf ball treatment.

I very much enjoy your style and your ability to create these characters. Both your short-form and long-form stories are entertaining and arousing.

ValensGirlValensGirlabout 12 years ago

I loved this, especially that she shows him no mercy and can keep him on the edge forever if she so chooses. So hot.

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