All Comments on 'Super Short Story Collection'

re: Natto - Wow. This is a powerful expression of the pure fetish mentality. Mere "kinks" are there to adorn sex; "fetishes" replace it. So glad you delved deep into the mindset, including the shame and the humiliation - which makes this, though I personally have no natto fetish or kink, so sexually charged. Also really good that you painted this picture from two points of view: the performer and the voyeur; I the reader am the third point of view, and find myself - shame notwithstanding - drawn in.

re: Ducking - I don't use a phone. So I am feeling very smug. Right, off to wand my big Rick...

re: Bacillus - You know, it's funny, but I've never found yoghurt sexy; I'm a whipped cream man myself, especially - as you know - Cornish clotted.

re: Egoist - Me me me!!! Grusha wanna shove his big thick number "1" up your swollen puffy ego and fuck the dripping Wittgenstein outta you!

re: Behind the Screen - And I trusted you so, Violet...!

Genius!

Thanks! I should try to challenge myself to the short short shorts again sometime. :)