All Comments on 'Suprising Visit Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

Great start

You have me waiting for the next chapter and intreguied

Anonymousover 13 years ago

MORE!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE! Does that get my point across clearly enough?????

zoetonderdanig over 13 years ago

MORE!

That was very well written. Please add more to it! :)

Anonymousover 13 years ago

very nice

well written and very enjoyable story. looking forward to more.

Charismata over 7 years ago

Thank you

The story is simply delicious and I hope to read the rest of it soon.

Rachel_Brks almost 3 years ago

LOVED IT!!!

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very hot! I especially enjoyed the scene in the elevator. I love how affectionate he is toward her, firm yet gentle.

elizaloo about 2 years ago

Yes please! Loved it - off to read Chapter 2.

LaceyFiresprig over 1 year ago

Really like the elevator sex. Now to the next chapter.

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