All Comments on 'Surface Seduction'

Great stuff, thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I like how Kate was determined to outdo Heidi and even mocked her in front of her face. This felt like a true story between two women fighting over a man. The older one past her prime and the new, shinier and more busty girl coming to replace her.

That was a smoking HOT fucking story

Goddamn this story is amazing, red fucking hot. I can't finish it without blowing my load every time, FUCK. Love how Kate dont care at all about the other woman and shows her up right in front of this man.

Interesting premise, logical flow, fun/catty competition, long and descriptive sex scenes. I liked it a great deal, but a man's cock does not fuck a clit. A clit can be enticed,stimulated, aroused, and excited with a dick, but the female penis can not be penetrated and thus it can't be fucked.

I had a habit of using the word 'clit' as another way of saying 'pussy'. It was a bad error on my part and something I've worked to correct in future stories since realizing my mistake. Thank you for the comment and kind words.

Damn, this was a hot fucking story. Would like to see a sequel to this. Maybe he does another model with Kate and they compete over who is the best?