All Comments on 'Surprise at the Glory Hole Pt. 03 - End'

An extremely hot story turned cold by the callous treatment of Luiz. The father's behavior and use of that Nancy term was bad enough, but the son not coming to Luiz's defense and his dismissive attitude was even worse. Really sorry you decided on this kind of ending for what I felt was originally a hot story. :-(

For stories to be “real” they also will often reflect the less pleasant aspects of characters’ personalities.

This device - however unpleasant - is the motor for pushing them forward. They wouldn’t have come there without that…unfortunately.

While I too am annoyed by the cold treatment of Luis, I feel that daddy and his boy both got what they really wanted. The son needs to have a heart to heart with his father about the need to have a relationship with another boy at college and that next time they can share the son’s lover in an even hotter three-way week, say on spring break. It would be even nicer if Luiz were that special lover that daddy and his boy shared. But that’s another story. Perhaps daddy will also find another partner to share. Maybe the high school swim coach. Anyway, it would be lovely to see the daddy become less rigid as he explores man to man sex beyond his son and finally come out fully as a loving gay man.

I think this is a great story and I love the dynamic between father and son. Luiz wasn’t a good fit, things turned out as they should. I know this is a perfect conclusion, but I want more!! Great job

5 a BIG 5, reminded me of my nephew he came to visit me for a couple of days the weekend he was just wearing shorts nothing else it wasn;t long before his eyes wre looking at mne a big bulge in his shorts I'd never had sex with a male before a couple of years since I'd had sex witgh a woman the way my nephew kedpt looking at mehis tongue slowly liking hs wet lips it wasn't long before my cock got hard in my jeans my nephew smails at nme lickin h lps moe then he took hisshort of naked hs cock bi hard

got me hard had me thinking about my uncle my dads brother I liked my uncle liked him a lot I was at school I knew my uncles car would be waiting outside waiting for me to drive me home to my mam and dad as soon as I got in my uncles car his hand fingers on my thigh gently squeezing my thigh caressing my thigh he did that every time he picked me up from school I got used to his hand on my thigh caressing my thigh one night he asked me did I like his hand on my thigh I said yes, he didn't drive me home he drove me to the woods empty woods he stopped the car his hands on both my thighs cersssing both my thighs close to my crutch he started touching rubbing my crutch my cock got hard he unzipped my trousers got my hard cock out he held my cock rubbed it then he sucked my cock deep in his mouth I loved my uncle sucking my hard cock loved my uncle making me have my first cum deep in his mouth every night after school he'd drive me to the woods he'd suck my cock making me cum in his mouth

I LOVED IT my first time he wasn't my daddy he was my class teacher I liked him a lot knew he liked me the way he'd look at me my class desk in front of his I could see under his desk seeing his legs his trousers he'd always have a big bulge in his trousers his eyes looking at me his smile his wink after class he asked me to help carry boxes to his car then he asked me to get in his car to help him carry the boxes in his house he wanted the boxes in his bedroom a big bed I was undoing the last box when he said my name I turned to him my eyes wide open he'd taken his trousers off his cock big hard he told me take your clothes off I'm going to fuck you his cock looked so big so hard so beautiful I took my clothes off he had me on my hands knees on his bed my first time hurt me his cock deep in my arse, not the last time my teacher fucked me

jt

Great story. My Dad was my first. I was lucky because he took his time and went slow the first couple times. He was big, 7 inches and the first couple times hurt. Lots of Vaseline and by the third time I was loving it.

Daddy :)

This is my favorite series BY FAR!!!! Not even close. I’ve read the entire series at least 5 times now. The imagery is just so amazing and amazing and touched on so many of my fantasies. I loved the son’s internal dialogue and made it easy to put myself in his shoes. I commend you on your work Author. I know this series is finished and had an excellent ending, but I can’t help but want a continuation (or prologue). It was far too easy for me to get emotionally attached to this series. I feel a mixture of satisfaction and post-series depression. Which means you certain did your job to write a griping story!! Again, thanks for creating this wonderful work Author!!!! Can’t wait to read your other works! :)