All Comments on 'Surprise Sister'

one word: bad

Not much there better luck next time. Maybe

What they said. Your writing is atrocious. You have my permission to look that up.

Just...honestly, I don't think this can be fixed. The premise is bad, the writing is bad, plots bad, sex is bad, it's all bad. There's nothing to even build on to make it better.

Sucks. Get a different job.

grammar?