All Comments on 'Surrender'

by InfernoAmore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
outstanding

Loved it - you don’t get this sort of story dynamic on here often enough and this was brilliantly done.

InfernoAmoreInfernoAmoreover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.

~Amore

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Incredibly crafted. Sorry but 5 stars is the best they let me give you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Really hot

Omg Please keep writing! I need more orgasms like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
more chapters?

Would love to see a continuation of this - maybe Christopher could go too far and give Luci too much dominance and independence, (ie without the ‘safe’ reveal/epilogue), only for him to have to conquer her anew?

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