by Ianb
i dont mind the story,but it is slow and drawn out and to
short for each episode.
This is a wonderful story! great plot development. it could be longer but i just love the turns and twist. keep it coming hard and strong.
sinse my mind is not so good as to finish this story, I would like to at least see a couple of more chapters.
into a real story instead of quick jerks that yank the reader around without going anywhere.