All Comments on 'Susan's Abduction'

... spoiled somewhat by the overuse of the passive voice. You can make the most fascinating things sound quite pedestrian if you are not careful; I suggest you rewrite and beef up the action.

i didn't care for ed and susan getting their revenge. they both deserved what was coming to them imo.

Ed and Susan were the ones who deserved to be punished.Laura deserved her revenge; Ed was the one who cheated not her.

Thanks for the story.

Laura still has Susan's SSI fraud to hold over her.

You make the cheated upon wife take the fall in this mess? What a joke. This was simply terrible. And get an editor. There were enough mistakes and holes in this silly thing to fill an ocean.

Well, would have liked to have another chapter of Laura's stay in bondage and training. Laura should come back well trained however another set of revenge options are in her mind. One for Susan (a very painful one) and one for Ed (again a painful one with a shock cock cage and sounding rod in his penis.