All Comments on 'Swanson Says'

A tour de force. Well written- good exposition, introduction of conflict, evolution of tension and a sustained and particularly juicy climax. Looking forward to more.

one of my faves ever

Wonderful story and great pace. A pleasure to read.

That was by far the best story I've read here. A part 2 with more waitresses and going further with the game would be awesome.

One of the most creative tales I have ever read. Well paced, thoughtful and respectful. Could it really go much further without spoiling the 'almost-acceptable- behaviour' tone you have achieved? I'm not so sure about that.

Encore!

One great adventure! Obviously a fantasy, it's highly unlikely that women would agree to this. It had a wonderful tease factor with excellent pacing. The narrative style suited the story well. I'd like to attend this game myself even though I'd be too old for it. Thank You!