by Asperger27
Meh. Everything happens too fast. And why does Daniel's body changes after the swap?
At first I wanted to keep it to where only Daniel and Connor can see each other as they are. With everyone else just noticing a sudden change in character.
But then I thought that maybe the physical change was real and Connor became a much bigger, stronger, study version of Daniel, while Daniel became the weak wimpy and meek version of Connor.
I hope that makes sense.
I'm glad people are liking it so far.
Asperger27 you kind of ruining the story by making Connor became a much bigger, stronger, study version of Daniel, while Daniel became the weak wimpy and meek version of Connor. What is the point of body swapping if their body changes to resemblance a old one like that? This entire plot is pretty much just an excuse for Connor to fuck mother of Daniel without effort.
Sarah is already in a relationship. With who? All will be revealed in the next chapter!
But I will say this....it isn't who you think it is.
Chapter two is being made now. Then it's back to finish Diary of a hairy girl Ch.05 and Sleeping with friends mom Ch.08.
This is a great idea, but it’s very. One day in and mom is already sleeping with her son and talked her into leaving her job for only fans?
Love where this is going very erotic. Can’t wait to see what happens in the other body!
I just hoping that the swapped process still isn't finished and Daniel will slowly absorb strength from Connor and slowly become more powerful like old Connor while Connor slowly becoming weaker, that would be more interesting.