All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams'

It would have been less boring if you did the barest of minimum proofreading to catch your many, many, many mistakes, so I understand you not wanting to waste you time on something that could have been good but wasn't because you lack the skill to make it interesting.

all narrative, no dialog = very boring.

The story made sense until two family members left on a trip. Then the timeline fell apart. The editor should have caught that. Otherwise, good read.

Good story sweetie

LOVE this story...please continue.

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