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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So his quick thinking gets him away from trouble including a drone, but he's not smart enough to look around before entering his house? That's the only issue I had.

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNow4 months agoAuthor

haha, In my mind, he was exhausted, and was thinking he was "home free". But maybe, he wasn't that bright.

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