by ShelbyDawn57
As always a beautiful well written story. With a happy ending and great adventure scenes. I am always looking for your new stories.
Love Mimi
Awesome story. So passionate. Kept me interested the whole way. Loved it. I had tears I was turned on and then relieved at the end. Love making in words.
I love your stories. The characters are real and your endings always make me happy too.
Keep up the great work.
As always Shelby nice story. Very believable and another happy ending. What a great love story.
I so love your stories. You'll put a tear in my eye and at the end a smile on my face.
On of your best. I love the way your characters all seem to be real, deal with real-world issues, and have real endings
You should think about publishing a ābest ofā anthology
Iād buy it
Loved it. I understand why you kept it so long. You write it and just want to go live in that world for a while. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Hi Gorgeous, if I ever make it back to see family in San Antonio and Austin I must take you to dinner, tht is if you would like that. I must also get around to signing up to Literotica and stop being a ghost. It is just that I have so many logins and passwords one more may be the straw that broke the camels back. I love your stories and the inventive way you merge all the detail into a soliloquy that moves the reader gently through the chapters as they unfold. Love your writing and I am sure I will love you as the disembodied author that you are. Wes xx
An amazing story. Such respect. I became very close with a woman, but we could never get to making love before she would stop things. We had an great relationship until one day she left with no trace of where she went. Her best friend told me she was trans and was so afraid of my reaction, she ran. I haven't had those feelings since. Such a shame.
Thanks for sharing, Shelby. Again, you've brought me to tears with a romance dressed up as erotica. I love everything about this! There is only one continuity error where Amanda is originally identified as Angela, but I get that it's hard to catch stuff like that (I've done it myself). As always, I look forward to reading your next offering. You're *so* good! Printed collection when?
Great stuff from you as usual. A wonderfully fem girl, romantic and with some amazing sexy times. Keep it up ;)
The fact that the heroine is blonde is unacceptable šš But seriously a truly wonderful story. Tony is incredible. Too bad she's not a redhead with green eyes and freckles šJeff was ok too. I'm sure I'll reread this story a few more times in the future. Keep up the good work.
Excellent, a good old style love story.it had a plot established, detail about the characters, 2nd work plot dtailed together and flowing from one plot to the next, everything was in context and characters, plot, direction, all culminated in a successful ending/
Beautiful story! Sexy stories are hot and fun. Romantic stories, especially with a heroine and a hero, are heartfelt and inspirational. Combining the two formats is a winning combination. Itās like when you're with someone you truly love. And youāre making love, and itās unrushed and heartfelt and absolutely beautiful. And while you're thinking, this is perfect, it couldnāt get any better, your passion ignites and burn hotter and hotter. And what started out as beautiful lovemaking turns into sweaty and intense, almost hurt yourself kind of porn style fucking. I know! Itās the best of both worlds! Same as combining sex stories with romance. They make each other better. And I love the trans and openly bi characters. They easily become heroic, encouraging and protecting each other daily, living alternative life styles. Itās sad that some people are so judgmental about sexual orientation. Seems itās slowly getting better! And as in life, the same as in stories, add love and it makes everything better.
Always happy to read your writings. Keep up the good work. Would love to read some written from a trans womanās perspective
Your stories just keep getting better. Your characters are real, their situations arenāt contrived, their emotions feel true, and the endings are like a sunset over the Pacific. I really like that your LGBTQ+ characters arenāt āheroicā but just want what all of us want, a good life with a partner who loves and cares. I will add my voice to the desire for a compilation of your stories that can be downloaded and saved, I would happily pay for that
Fantastic story! It is so nice to read a hot story about a beautiful trans woman that does NOT have an overwhelmingly huge cock.