All Comments on 'Sweetheart Succubus Ch. 04'

I absolutely LOVE this series. Great idea on the story. Amazing writer.

This series is really exciting and really well written!

Would like to read more of this story

This is an interesting take on Succbi in general and a surprisingly believable romance.

I hope you continue it.

I agree with the other readers - this is a WONDERFUL series - and more chapters are eagerly awaited by your audience, dear author! Extremely well written - very engaging and a really enjoyable FUN read!! If I weren't already married, I would LOVE to have a girlfriend like Melissa! Am hoping in the coming chapters they really will make their relationship completely official - as in openly (and repeatedly) declaring to each other "I love you" and commit 100% to each other (as in she moves in with him or vice versa) - maybe some cool stuff from the coven meeting where there is some kind of spiritual ceremony where they could actually get married (and a way for them to be married civilly as well, since Melissa can completely disguise as a human). I understand that in the spiritual world, once a spirit (PARTICULARLY succubi) claim a human as a mate (and typically they mate with only one human and it is for all eternity - a complete, never-ending love), they are fiercely protective, giving, loving (and, of course, rather possessive and jealous) and will go to the ends of the universe for the one they love - and that said love truly is eternal. Please write more - and perhaps consider working something super romantic like that into the coming chapters - they make an AWESOME couple! Maybe down the road he gets Melissa pregnant?! :)