All Comments on 'Swim Club Ch. 02'

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marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Great Second Chapter

That was a great second chapter for Anna and the swim club. I like how you develop the relationship between Anna and Jana in this chapter. I can't hardly wait to see which you do in the third chapter with them in Jana's apartment.

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