All Comments on 'Switch Play'

by D_Lynn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Time for more from you

I've been rereading your stuff since we haven't gotten anything new in a while. I would love more of this one. Definitely not enough switch stories and especially from a strong author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Switch play not written too well, unfortunately. Suggest writer revise his writing experiences, in line with harsh reality. Awarded a 4+ at the end of this story!

Disappointing lack of cohesion, after an exciting beginning. Hope writer improves?

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 12 years ago
If only....

more women had your imagination! What a wonderful sex life they could have. Thanks for many happy endings! It took three days to properly enjoy this bit of heaven. And.... a bonus for me....a new vein of erotic thrills to explore!!!

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Disgusting, Filthy, Perverted

and hot as hell. A real good stroker. Well done, Mistress D_Lynn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More to come ...

... I'm very pleased to hear it! A great story - thank you and please have five stars for your trouble!

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