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Click here"Jessica?"
"Hunh?" she'd started to doze off.
"We never had our talk about the rooming arrangement."
"Uh..."
What was stopping me?
I smiled as I told her, "Stay another week, and we'll talk then."
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Told ya there was sex in this story! Stay tuned next week for the next episode of Switched: Special Victims Unit! KLUNG KLUNG
Thanks for reading! If you're enjoying Switched, all I ask is that you leave some feedback or make your lover shout my name the next time you do it.
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This adventure is really well-written and has a great storyline. The occasional errors are a bit of a distraction, but not enough to take away from the overall great writing. My suggestion is don't let those errors that slip by discourage your fabulous writing talent. Before publishing, books are edited 12 to 15 times if not more to help refine and catch the annoying little things that creep in. You certainly need not go that far for casual writing as here and thank you for sharing it with us.
I love your comments! Trying to get to a place in life where I can write again because I love y'all!
This story is a bit weird. But it is a good type of weird. ( Kind of the way some people refer to me ! )
Girly or more correctly for me, Gurly Giggles
I love the naming of tools, parts and cars correctly.
I spotted a very few blunders like, "same same" words being used. Either this author pays attention to his writing, or has some sort of Editing program or person which or who is just not finding minor faux pas's. He may also have a proofreader who simply reads "too" fast.
There were a few lines that contained no "necessary" conjunctive word to the rest of an explanatory phrase or sentence.
I know there are some readers who could care less about such matters.
But !
Not being well educated, as well as being a slow reader which causes me to notice things that do not seem correct in a writing.
And since most authors here can handle or even request "Constructive Criticism" I leave my comments hoping they may assist the writer with any writing they do.
So that's my story an I'm stickin to it !
> She started to apologize again but I stopped her. "You are forgiven. But I'm afraid if we don't take care of you, I'm going to come home to find you riding my dryer."
> Her eyebrows rose. "That works?"
I laughed so hard at that - priceless