All Comments on 'SX69 - Ultimate Love Potion Ch. 22'

I have read all 23 chapters of your story and thought it was pretty good. It is great that you have someone to edit it for you but you also need a proof reader to take care of the typo's.

Keep up the good work because I believe you have a future there.

You seem to have done your research on Islamic culture. Slightly disappointed you called the abaya a dress, when it's supposed to be a robe, but I'll give you props.

I love the foot kissing aspect, and his internal monologue about inadequacy. Fun seeing how power hungry the former nerd is getting. Great job!