All Comments on 'Sydney's Descent Ch. 07'

I liked the length of this chapter and the fact that Sydney has a mistress and master. Sounds like her sexual virginity will be soon be gone in all her openings. Keep up the good work. Thank you.

Excellent chapter and progress. Pleasant length. Will email you suggestions.

A really well-paced, arousing story with good character and plot development. Thoroughly enjoying it and looking forward to more. Thanks!

If you like suspenseful non-con stories, this one's for you. Has elements of "Story of O," Gor, an others. Has lots of humiliation, which I really like! I'm hopeful that the author will complete this story and positive feedback is so important to motivate writers.

Well Sydney has continued to fall deeper and deeper now with a master and full time mistress. It will be interesting to see how you develop this story. Keep writing.

Really like it and where it is headed. Well written, much better language skills than most authors on this site.

Not sure if Kira is on her side or on the guy's side. Interested to see how it pans out.

Like where this is going love to seeKira start using Sydney and her turning into a hot slut!

Totally enjoying this. Really nicely written, and I can't wait to see what happens next