All Comments on 'Sylvia'

Get a clue and and either write the full story in English or whatever language, just don't mix and match. This kills the reading and story line completely.

A very realistic story. things can happen at the office Christmas party. good work keep it up

This is my first comment here (although I have been visiting for years.) Writing in dialect is fine it adds to the story the above anonymous comment is way off base. I have spent a lot of time in other cultures and have had to rely on pidgen to get laid. It is real and adds flavor to the story.