All Comments on 'Sympathy Pt. 01 - Comedy of Errors'

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OrthopodeOrthopodeover 3 years ago
Ok but. .

Just how many stupid terms for cock and erection do you know?

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckover 3 years ago
Where?

Where is this "part 5" you speak of?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"If you have not read any of my stories before, it would probably be useful to read Part 5 before you start, as this could ease you through my personal writing "quirks"."

Considering there is only one other story in your list, this begs the question, "What the fuck are you talking about?"

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

There was only one story before this, and you forgot to load part 5 beforehand.

Off to a great start, tell the reader you write in a weird way, then not include the explanation. Heading for 1 star.

sp9983sp9983over 3 years ago
Part 2

Do us a favor, forget about part 2.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Way too turgid for my taste.

You really screwed this up, what Pt 5???

No link to the other parts either???!!!

2/5

lilshymynxlilshymynxover 3 years ago

After digging around I found the "writing cypher" (which is pt. 4, by the way, not pt. 5). Why you would want to force your readers to learn some kind of "code" in order to read your work is beyond me.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Great start

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

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