All Comments on 'Synthetic Evolution'

by GadenKerensky

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This is a well written and engaging story. (JMO of course.) At one point I thought that it would be enough as a one-off. However, at the end I am left wanting to know the final outcome, providing that it doesn't morph into a multi-year construct with hundreds of chapters repeating the same scenarios over and over. Thank you for your efforts, GadenKerensky. Well done. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

What a Great Story. I found it a bit confusing at first with the three personalities and the descriptions but once I figured out it was three people in one body it made sense and I looked up the artist.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is seriously one of the best pieces of erotica I've ever read. Not only is it incredibly hot, but very well written. Character development, emotion, empathy for each character even though they are so different. And none of of the jarring spelling or syntax errors you can find in a lot of stories. The talent you have for writing and pride you take in doing it well are evident. I sincerely hope that the artist you based this work off of reads this someday and you two do a collab of an illustrated work. I'll be reading more of your stories for sure.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is fantastic. Well written, thought out, great pacing, great sex but so much more than just smut. I really hope you return to this universe at some point.

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