by comegently
A vivid tale of mutual lust and love, so beautifully told. Were I to experience a similar session i, too, would be honoured to have been so loved
"as she thrusted slow and deep." A yes and possibly better yes scenario: possibly more erotic might be 'as she thrust slowly and sensually deep' or just 'more deeply' . . . Just some thoughts since so many of us often forget that thrust can be both current, past and future tense, depending upon the structure of the sentence in which it is used.
Glad you liked it and there may well be a sequel. I have something in mind, and as with this story, there are aspects I have not covered before.
I've started writing a sequel. It will take a while, but when I write these stories, they have a life of their own and lead me through the narrative.