All Comments on 'Take @ Chance Ch. 01: By Laura'

Nicely written, Julie, and I did like the paragraph when Laura was contemplating a bleak married life in the Timmy family with his mother at the helm. And I think we can all guess who would have worn the trousers in that relationship (it wouldn't have been either Laura or Timmy). But... on the negative side I thought Debbie rather an unpleasant character. If a man had behaved on the train the way Debbie did, he'd be setting himself up for six months in the slammer. Nevertheless, worth five stars for the quality.

Delightfully raunchy and pleased to see there will be more (?). Loved the witty/sarcastic start about Timmy and the storyline and characters only became crazier. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I adored this. You write so well, and you set the scene perfectly. For those of us of a submissive disposition, it was heavenly - a shame I can only give 5 stars xxxxx

that was hot, i do wish there is such a app 5 stars

this was one of the hottest stories i've ever read as a submissive x