All Comments on 'Take Your Daughter to Work Day - Rena'

Great job! I hope you continue Rena's ventures into her the sex industry. Had me hooked!

Nice story...well written and mildly erotic, just as it is your first time, highly realistic! 5 Stars!! I would love to read another installment!

I like the way you developed the story and characters

Excellent! Would love to learn more about Rena’s journey. It started off so well. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Great writing. Abit business-like at times which is totally appropriate for the story. It jolts you back from the otherwise quite gentle erotic. Congratulations.

Thank you for participating in my event :-)

Excellent first time story. I'd like to read more Rena adventures. Five stars

Great piece of erotica, well written, with good character development, and the story based on some original ideas.

Really enjoyed it, good flow as well as describing her changing feelings. Hope you'll do more with her.