All Comments on 'Taken By the Sea Serpent'

That was very original and fun, Im very into that sort of pleasure story.

Great job and please keep writing more like that, there is not enough of it out there.

I like that you combined two types of stories here, and created an alternative/happier ending for Andromeda. I also felt what happened to her was so unfair!

Thank you for your comments. It means a lot when someone offers feedback, and I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

Interesting reproduction system.

Great storytelling.

Lovely.. ending?

Hi, I read this story and love it. I am curious, however, will there be more?

More? Probably not. It feels complete to me. But I do find tentacles to be very exciting, so maybe something similar one day.

Thanks for commenting - happy you enjoyed it.

Was the main character's name a Harry Potter reference???

I didn't know there was an Andromeda in HP. I'm referencing the Greek myth in which Perseus saves Andromeda from Ketos.

I haven't cum so hard such a long time. That was hot!

On a technical note, I admire your ability to invoke so much clear imagery in so few words. I could see in my mind's eye so clearly what was happening and how, and I believe that's one of the major things that makes a story so good, no matter if it's smut or something totally benign. Bravo!

Thank you for the comment. This was one of the first bits of erotica I wrote, and it's great that people enjoy it.

I do like tentacle stories they turn me on gracias 4 the orgasm lol

You're very welcome...

Well, that's one hell of a diet LOL. but what about Ketos? kinda odd that the titular Sea Serpent just fades into the background. THIS NEEDS A PART II.

I did write a short continuation of this. I'll see if I can find it and add here.

still excellent

One of my favourite erotic stories.

@AlinaX did you manage to find that “short continuation” of this story? If so, can you please post it?

I have just submitted the continuation for publication here. Could take a few days to appear.