All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 02'

This is good! Looking forward to what comes next.

Only critique - the words seem like they don't make sense. He asked if she was a 'maid', but then asked if she was used to "anal and giving head" which are modern terms. Why would a fae know those words? And if they did, they would have used the word 'virgin'.

Looking forward to ongoing storyline.

Can’t wait for an update!

Erotic. Looking forward to update.