All Comments on 'Taken... Her Pubes... and Virginity!'

The 200 or so words around the defloration were good. I just skimmed the rest. I enjoyed the descriptions a lot.

Congratulations on an EXCELLENT piece of work, this series has improved with each of the four episodes, I found the original premise extremely interesting and your interpretation of that premise unusual.

The earlier chapters appeared to be a little formal and stilted, but as the writing progressed the writing style relaxed and became increasingly easier to read.

Thank you for publishing your work on this site.