All Comments on 'Taken... Her Pubes... and Virginity!'

Congratulations on an EXCELLENT piece of work, this series has improved with each of the four episodes, I found the original premise extremely interesting and your interpretation of that premise unusual.

The earlier chapters appeared to be a little formal and stilted, but as the writing progressed the writing style relaxed and became increasingly easier to read.

Thank you for publishing your work on this site.

The 200 or so words around the defloration were good. I just skimmed the rest. I enjoyed the descriptions a lot.