All Comments on 'Taken in The Souk'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Hope you keep writing in this genre!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Good work. I like the concept of a 53 year old MILF being raped, but there's nothing wrong with her being more voluptuous. You might consider having her taken and sold as a sex slave.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Whats next

please add a follow up to this one. Well written. I suggest a strip tease to start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love doing things like this

The weakness and passiveness that she shows beings out the aggressive male nature. It will be no time at all and she’ll be the perfect slut. I’m sure she starts to cum from being used and begins to need being treated that way. Great little sex slave to show off. Find the biggest black man and watch how she crawls for him. The horror she feels looking up as one man pulls out after cumming in her to see a huge black standing between her mature white thighs. Make her admit she’s just a whore as she cums on a black dick. Begging to be on her hands and knees as they use her submissive cunt.

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