All Comments on 'Taken Pt. 02'
by DaisyDouglas
- 7 Comments
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoYou may call me Master or Sir, whatever pleases you , or something to that effect, the bad guy says. So who is "calling the shots" here he or Emma? Aside from the problem of using Master and Sir as if they meant the same thing (which they do not in modern usage), the following dialogue excludes either one of those words, which derails any continuity to the characters.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI’d rather slit my wrists than be held captive and he’s planning on leaving her alone whilst he goes to work, moron.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLoving this continuation and hoping you'll post more soon. The bondage and gag scenes are wonderful!
Anonymous3 months agoWhy do people start stories, put all that effort in, do a very good job setting up for an exciting story... ........ and stop.
It's so bloody annoying
