All Comments on 'Taken to the Cleaners'

You know, it was written well enough, but the premise is ridiculous. As others have pointed out, her behavior would be an advantage to her first husband, painting himself as a victim--The loyal, pious, man, married to a wanton Jezebel. Maybe you SHOULD have included a wizard... That would have made the story slightly more believable. You went a long way around the block to write, basically, a different twist on the old gang rape scenario. It's not your writing skill that's the problem. It's your imagination that needs work! Good luck with that.