All Comments on 'Taking Evelyn'

I hope you continue with this story. You can't just leave it hanging like that.

I'd love another chapter - please continue!

No means no, I don’t enjoy fantasy stories about rape because rape isn’t sexy. I do enjoy Reluctance stories as well as a ‘Rape Fantasy’ but this wasn’t either of those it was straight forward rape.

Aside from the rape scene that I skipped over this was really well written, very descriptive you painted a vivid image of the household and it’s characters. I couldn’t decide if it was meant to be historical, set during/ just before the American Civil War or if it was an alternate earth type of thing. If it was the former then the girl’s reality is really shitty, she would be pregnant and homeless if she’s a servant or sold off if she’s a slave. Either way that makes his actions worse. If the story is set in an alternate earth then obviously I’ve no idea what her fate would be although it’s highly unlikely to be a positive one. So definitely not erotic, just another self entitled arsehole destroying someone’s life.

Tess (UK)

Interesting premise.

Sex is stilted though.

Ends too abruptly.

Four stars.