All Comments on 'Taking Her Friend’s Place'

Good writing, but unfinished. Just getting into it when……no page 2!

Look forward to reading your older stories.

Incomplete, but good start

Did the system somehow eat the rest of the story?

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Well written, and I’m old enough to see where this could happen, but a story headed to a high rating just collapsed.

You are meant to write, let it flow.

Lovely and loving story. I am glad that you returned to writing after all those years. I hope you keep it up ( no pun intended). Maybe a sequel to this as the affair develops? Maybe some tangential involvement of her friend?

Glad you decided to write again. You certainly bring the reader into your protagonist’s mindset. Hope you continue to write.

welcome back

So, why didn’t you finish the damn story? You write well. This is a very nice start, with a realistic and nuanced exploration of Susan’s thoughts and emotions, You get things going and then BAM, you just stop. They climaxed but the story didn’t! No follow-up, no denouement, No indication that there is any Part 2 coming. I hope you bring us Part 2 soon.

Nonsense, you're the author, if you think the story is finished then it's finished, regardless of anyone else's opinion. Well written and I enjoyed it, welcome back, I look forward to reading your future submissions.

Thanks for Writing!

I would encourage more stories, please.

I'm hoping this will continue as a series and the characters relationship grows

Glad you’ve returned to writing! Nice little vignette

So beautiful!! I hope there will be more!!

Half a story, so half a score.

Wasnt worth writing

Or reading

A divorce is on the way

Seems quite the reserved tart. Taking her anally in front of a crowd of appreciative onlookers should solve the problem.

Hmm, as the old lady in the burger commercial asked, "Where's the beef?" If you're going to begin a story you ought to finish it. This dropped from 4 to 2 stars in a damned quick hurry.

Wow, you shoulda stayed gone.

A very sexy story. Thank you.

AND?

Couldn't finish it. The beginning had nothing that would catch my interest. Try some drama,, suspense, emotion, etc., anything that would want the reader to continue. Didn't rate it since I appreciate your attempt to keep people mile me entertained.

Welcome back and what a hot story. Being 60 doesn't matter if you still have a sex drive. I love sex with an experienced woman, especially if she takes the reins....

SHOULD HAVE STAYED RETIRED FROM WRITING.

More of these characters pls. I like you economical writing style, all words significant, no flufff or filler.

First 3 quarters was a solid 5. You painted in just a few paragraphs a real sense of who Susan was.

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Then it fell off a cliff. The ending was both way too abrupt AND without any depth. As if Susan had just reverted to an adolescent again. Very unsatisfying ending.

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3 ***

More needs to be said about this couple. Yes, continue with you writing. Thanks for your return.

What a nice lady, sharing her husband with her friend. I scored it the same as I would have for a wife sharing story.

It was alright. Wrong category, but an OK story. She and the husband will form an emotional bond, they'll ask for permission to spend more time, then a weekend, which will be denied, then they'll simply starting cheating on the ailing wife. And who's fault will that be? Predictable and a bit ridiculous. But not bad.

Wow! Nice reentry. It would seem that the life experience gained since you first wrote enhances your ability to address issues of concern to many LW readers. Thank you for this story.

I don't get it. She was already a proven slut from her dalliance while married. What's the big deal that she is fucking someone else while a widow.

Very good story. The situation you describe, a wife seeking a surrogate lover for her husband, is not as unusual as many people would think. It is a sign of great love on the part of the wife incapable of intimacy to seek pleasure for her man from a trusted person. I am one of those trusted persons, and I have been intimate partners with a dear friend's husband for five years. We both are in our 60s and crave passionate sex as much as ever. Since I am a widow, the arrangement is wonderful for me, too. Keep writing.

Nicely written, good storyline.

Written with understanding.

Hope there is a continuation

of this as I feel there is scope

to do so.

Welcome back, and thanks for the great story!

Excellent treatment of a potentially traumatising situation...well done!!!!

geriatric sex should be in mature

Good beginning!

4

I loved it, not sure why you didn’t write for so long, and it’s not my business anyway!

Please carry on I like your stories, so 5 stars and I look forward to more!

Thanks

Bill

Great story.

Well worth the long wait

Hope we get to see more of this