All Comments on 'Taking Jaime Ch. 03'

Can't wait until this psychotic cunt gets his throat cut. For the first two chapters, he at least had the pretense of being desperately in love with her and making out like she was a substitute for some wife he lost. Can't do what he did with the pictures and porn of her and pretend you're in love with a girl. If he truly believes that, he really is just plain psychotic and deserves the slow painful death Jaime's brother promised him.

On the plus side, you've created a nasty character who is dropping any pretense at being a loving master like the more ridiculous rape-romances and a sympathetic heroine who reacts realistically to being raped and impregnated and uses her intelligence effectively. Both are elements of great story telling - too many females are limp and borderline retarded dishrags that all just happen to be 4.0 geniuses that exist for no other reason than to be fucked, while their rapist really isn't such a bad chap after all, just misguided.

Looking forward to seeing whether you break completely out of the prevalent non-con molds. Keep up the good work.

great story, waiting for the next chapter

I really like this story.

Where's the rest

I'm loving this story so far, please we need more

I just adore this story, I hope it can get an ending.

I was looking forward to Jaime falling for landon... ☹

When will this story be finished? I am quite invested now and need to read more!