All Comments on 'Taking Santa's Cute Elf'

Dumb, badly written, and gross.

I'm glad this story was semi-consensual. With this story's set up, I feel like a full noncon story would feel too creepy.

But as it stands, I really liked it. The epilogue was a neat, VERY unexpected bonus.

5*

Too much dom nonsense and not enough time spent on the actual sex.

Pretty good story. Would love to hear more though.

Hot story.