All Comments on 'Taking the Risk Ch. 06'

I never usually lose interest and stop reading a story this early but the chapters are so short that I have spent more time clicking forward than I have reading. The plot is not too bad but the structure is poor and ill thought out.

This story is great. The character development is excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next. The suspense of what will happen next is keeping me on the edge of my chair. Please write more soon.