All Comments on 'Taking Up when Gramps Left Off Ch. 02'

So erotic, another chapter would have been good but great read

I could imagine this happening on a boat in the Norfolk Broads, exciting story

I got wet reading this, love the story

Loved the erotic lines of the story

Jack,

Your stories are fabulous , but you are rushing the endings.

You used to have longer drawn out love making sessions and such, but now they seem”slam bam thank you man” style.

Love all your stories and watch for them all the time

Loved reading the chapters of this story..

Lucky Jack he didn't need that girlfriend for sure, with his Mom and Gran there for him to have so much with both of them.

It's a pity that the story didn't include Moms Daughter or Sister..If they existed.

Maybe another chapter to be written to include either both or one of them.

Jack would surely be one happy guy with an additional lady or two for his enjoyment.

I could envisage me being the sister comming in on this story and looking forward to all the happening with my Mom Sister and Jack..

Oh the thorts.

Jacqui of willjreedy@outlook.com

Loved the idea of a guy inheriting his mum and gran plus his gramp's wealth and souvenir photos. The homemade porn angle and the anal kinda killed things though. You won points back for him breeding his mum successfully but the whole thing was way too rushed like you were copying out a recipe from a friend in a different language. It seemed summarized and the syntax was like subtitles from a German film with auto-translated English captions or something.