by Ennis Piceo
OH well wander off. Nothing to see, nothing to do. dumb te dumb... Why do I read these stories about nothing happening?
... I totally understand where Rosie is coming from. All you've got here is the introduction to a story. You establish the characters and the initial scenario - then it stops. Far too short even for an episode in a multi-part story, and as a whole stand-alone story it is woefully inadequate.