All Comments on 'Taking Your Shot'

This story MUST continue! Great debut!

Wow what a wonderful story. You show her innocents beautifully. Nicholas is a perfectly wonderful guy and has allowed Natalie to truly find herself. Let’s let the romance continue in part two please.

A very good coming out. Now she needs to share the night's experience with her friend

What a gorgeous tale. I love the way you describe the fears and doubts we have about ourselves and others. How you explore the playfulness of getting to know someone. Finally, you capture beautifully the joy and excitement of giving pleasure and the dynamic of physical and sexual power.

Such a delightfully sweet story of Natalie’s acceptance of who she is.

Thank you all for your responses. I truly do appreciate the feedback. This is my first publication of my writings. I have an entire outline for this story that will be multiple additional chapters.

Lovely story!! I hope you continue writing!! Xoxox

Wow

Can't wait to read more.

Great job! Really hope to see more

Beautiful story, You took me from laughing to fearful, to crying to happiness to passion. This was wonderful telling of first moments and awakenings. I hope to see more from you, you are very talented. Thank you so much for taking me there and allowing me to feel all the firsts again.

Fantastic!!!

Love it! Well written and so tender.

Thanks for sharing!