by LauraCurious43
Great storyline. I love that you had a secret that you were going to keep forever, but being divorced, gave you the freedom to tell. I don’t really care if it’s true or not but writing that you wanted it not to be known was reason for me to keep reading. I mean who doesn’t want to be let in on a secret. I also liked that you discovered the power you had to turn a man’s head, to seduce him, and even get the job before you give him the blow job. Nicely detailed toe and foot fetish at the end too. I think my only criticism would be that the story had a lot of typographical errors, which makes smooth reading difficult when words are left out, misspelled, and/or run together. Perhaps ask a trusted friend to proofread before you submit? But keep writing. You are a good storyteller.
wow...very exciting.....when does she turn into a queen of spades??? piercings and tattoos????